Swaying in the breeze (haiku)

Swaying in the breeze (haiku)

A Poem by hcarson
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My first attemp at haiku...thank u dhimen for the explanations on how these things work lol

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Swaying in the breeze (haiku)
Swaying in the breeze
Hearing whispering of leaves
To answer is life

© 2016 hcarson


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hcarson
All criticisms welcome 😁

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This one has so many potential meanings. I feel as though the poem is about so much more than leaves.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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hcarson

2 Years Ago

Thanks u ☺ i was stumped with what to write then caught sight of the tree in the garden lol
You are welcome, you stunned me the way you came with the idea instantly... Excellent work to me... Just the beginning Helen, many more to come... Lol, my name is under typo attack Hehe... 'Dhimen' could be Dhiman lol...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hcarson

2 Years Ago

You know me...i can never remember if it e or a so i alternate it so its bound to be correct some of.. read more
Inject Positivity

2 Years Ago

Haha, no matter what you call I'm still the same person... So don't worry... It's absolutely fine..... read more
hcarson

2 Years Ago

Ive posted another...hope its correct...u no me i get a little carried away lol

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hcarson
hcarson

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