Serenity comes

Serenity comes

A Poem by hcarson
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Senryu done from a word given me by INJECT POSITIVITY

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Serenity comes (senryu)

Serenity comes
As morning light befalls us
Dreams lifted away

© 2016 hcarson



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this is more senryu...as haiku is strictly about nature...senryu has human elements..

nonetheless...there is something about waking to serenity..either that dawn chases away the bad dreams, or embraces the sweet dreams as we wake and feel refreshed.

j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hcarson

1 Year Ago

Ahh i did wonder, iam new to this and get confused which are which as i have terrible memory, thank .. read more



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this is more senryu...as haiku is strictly about nature...senryu has human elements..

nonetheless...there is something about waking to serenity..either that dawn chases away the bad dreams, or embraces the sweet dreams as we wake and feel refreshed.

j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hcarson

1 Year Ago

Ahh i did wonder, iam new to this and get confused which are which as i have terrible memory, thank .. read more
So very insightful Helen, you brought the imagery so beautifully and cleanly... I'm so very happy to see the way you are showing your passion in your works now... Lovely...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 1 Year Ago



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hcarson
hcarson

cardiff, barry, United Kingdom



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