A sound of splashing

A sound of splashing

A Poem by hcarson
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Haiku

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A sound of splashing (haiku)

A sound of splashing
Cushioned by tranquility
A mariners song

© 2016 hcarson



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hcarson
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the ruckus of the splashing juxtaposed to the tranquility of life...that perfect balance.

j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hcarson

1 Year Ago

Love that, when its quiet but u hear water..relaxing..so long as it isnt the dripping of a tap lol, .. read more
Superb again with the concept... This is another beautiful work... Just wondering whether you meant mariner's song or am I thinking the wrong way lol... But it's amazing...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hcarson

1 Year Ago

I did, thank u for pointing it out to me, very grateful 😁 u invaluable as always

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hcarson
hcarson

cardiff, barry, United Kingdom



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I have an interest in writing short stories and poetry in some shape or form apparently since coming here! Being a mother of five means I have no end of inspiration! I'm an animal lover and have an Am.. more..

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