The Blue Sky

The Blue Sky

A Poem by irenic
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the poem is about nature and what lesson does nature teaches us

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The blue sky gives calm to humanity

Filled with clouds and sun at the day

Scorching sun provides light to humanity

“How much illumination is important!

How much powerful is it than weapon!”

The message it gives

By hiding the sun, clouds give lesson

“Silence of suffering one from assault

Is more responsible than the

Violence of who launch an assault”

The objects themselves and the lesson which they give

In the day makes the sky

The one who give lessons of irenic

Moon, the object in the sky comes at night advises

“be the lover of peace instead of war

Like flowers instead of bomb”.

“Spread verdure every where

This is the symbol of Aeolian of peace”

Lesson given by stars

The blue sky

Gives us such a vast lesson

What about its painter who paint it

Definitely sure he likes peace

But in his eyes

His painting’s importance isn’t s great

Painted the whole world by him

But a drop size importance of it in his eyes

This shows he is altruistic and pulchritude

On his pulchritudinous mountain collapse

When he show his finger

The painter is God

The most beneficent and the most merciful Almighty God

In whose eyes drop size importance of the world shows

Each drop given by him to us has very importance.

 

 

 

 

 


© 2013 irenic



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This poem is nicely balanced... the sun moon and stars all have a part in the blue sky, each represent something... war, peace, love, distress, etc. Then it gives recognition to the creator of it all, God who's the Painter.

Posted 1 Year Ago


irenic

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment.........................:)
Ian Craven

1 Year Ago

You are so welcome Irenic!! 😊
irenic

1 Year Ago

:).............................................:)
I really enjoyed this piece... nature isn't necessarily the easiest to write about... mostly because it's been done so many times but it takes an original idea to make it stand out. You did that in this piece and I enjoyed it very much :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


irenic

2 Years Ago

Thank you for appreciation. :)
Nature is always a nice subject for me--when think of poetry and we relate to it.
Appreciating the beauty and the wonder of it in our words is measuring it in some way.
The way we see it all around the world is striking and breathtaking.
Your words tell the story of the creator and the painter well.
The only suggestion I have is to make your font bigger so it reads well and maybe adding some pulses and breaks for the reader. You might look closer at your punctuation (is it working the way you intended?)

Posted 2 Years Ago


irenic

2 Years Ago

I will see and thank you for review :)
Josie E. Cook M. A.

2 Years Ago

You are welcome. :)
irenic

2 Years Ago

:) ............................
"When he show his finger
The painter is God
The most beneficent and the most merciful Almighty God
In whose eyes drop size importance of the world shows
Each drop given by him to us has very importance."

I feel the great appreciation and thanks of the narrator to God and His creation. A wonderful poem...:)...................


Posted 3 Years Ago


“be the lover of peace instead of war
Like flowers instead of bomb”.
“Spread verdure every where
This is the symbol of Aeolian of peace”
Great and true words. I loved the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


A nice poem with a strong message..

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Karachi, Sindh, Pakistan



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