Second

Second

A Poem by isus
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poem by my friend Keva and me.

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Walls are strangling me,
sky has fallen,
doors are open.

It has a meaning, those words
As they were spoken
Were, simultaneously, written
In blood.

Chalice is empty
poison is spilled
on the floor.

It was a picture that spoke for itself.

© 2014 isus



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you have given the best personal thought of life

Posted 6 Months Ago


isus

6 Months Ago

well, it's multipersonal then :p
This is powerful when you relate it to a personal event. Thank you for this, so many people can interpret it in different ways and that's what art is for.

Posted 12 Months Ago


Well done, thanks for submitting to the Pride in Poetry contest. Since I will be judging this for the contest I will not write about it here (yet) nor rate it. Once the contest is over, I may drop by to leave a better review. Take care and keep on writing poetry.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tragic events takes only second to happen, this is what I can learn from it.

very nice poem,.

You are well versed poet.

thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


isus

1 Year Ago

thanx on your kind words
irenic

1 Year Ago

.............................................:)
An enchanting tale like something from the Roman times, poison, the possible assassination, the chalice while the volcano erupts covering Pompeii.

Posted 1 Year Ago


isus

1 Year Ago

very nice interpretation :D thanx andrew
I love it. Maybe it is just me, but it kind of reminds me of Hamlet in a way.

Posted 3 Years Ago


isus

3 Years Ago

now you say it i can see connections, now it reminds me of Hamlet also
This is fantastic! It can be interperted in so many ways, i love it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


isus

3 Years Ago

i like this one also, thank you on reading :)
I really like how you end it with "doors are open" it's sort of unexpected and only emphasizes how trapped one can feel. I also like the written in blood part, words, esp. from certain people are so powerful.

Posted 3 Years Ago


isus

3 Years Ago

oh, this is one piece that i can say i really like and i can understand your view of it. i think we .. read more
Frontier

3 Years Ago

:) You know, that thought also passed thru my mind, about the similarity in writing. Yeah I also fee.. read more
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Wonderful imagery.. this poem has multi-layers of meaning behind it... great job isus

Posted 3 Years Ago


isus

3 Years Ago

glad you like it :)
This is a very interesting piece. Lovely imagery and excellent flow of words. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


isus

3 Years Ago

glad you like it, thanx for stoping by :)

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brod na savi, Croatia



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