Poem

Do it alone, that way you'll gain

much more strength.

Turn it on and wait again,

let it show you all the things you saw before,

but things have changed and

epidemic held upon new light

swept away before the old depression.

Reviews

[Chris]

"strenght" - strength

I liked the first stanza a sort of reassertion of our own control of our portion of existence. But the second stanza was the stronger of the two - it spoke toward personal growth and the consequences.

[isus]

thank you, i'll fix it now. gotta work on my grammar

[ANTO]

The mind can play such tricks as can the light.
We have got to learn to trust ourselves or we will never be able to trust others.

I was minded of a quote by Bruce Lee when I read this -
'(For) it is easy to criticize and break down the spirit of others, but to know yourself takes a lifetime.' - Bruce Lee

[Gee]

And I have another from when he attempted to break 3 concrete blocks with his head....."F**k me that hurt "

[ANTO]

lmao -
ah ! so that's why he took that aspirin? Poor sod...