What'd ya think

Living on the razors edge I'm looking at old retired people getting* into bus just because it's free for them and I'm asking you, is it free for all? or it's team deathmatch? Is friendly fire on?

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

very short clever poem thought provoking indeed not sure i understood its entirety.
thats the beauty of poetry we dont have to understand every line.
thanks for submitting this into my comp good luck

[Ayushi Jha]

BEAUTIFUL! The intricacy of the thoughts that this poem is trying to convey is so beautifully knitted that I am struck. Loved it!

[isus]

You leave me speechless.