What'd ya think

What'd ya think

A Poem by isus

Living on the razors edge I'm looking at old retired people getting* into bus just because it's free for them and I'm asking you, is it free for all? or it's team deathmatch? Is friendly fire on?

© 2017 isus



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very short clever poem thought provoking indeed not sure i understood its entirety.
thats the beauty of poetry we dont have to understand every line.
thanks for submitting this into my comp good luck

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


BEAUTIFUL! The intricacy of the thoughts that this poem is trying to convey is so beautifully knitted that I am struck. Loved it!

Posted 10 Months Ago


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isus

10 Months Ago

You leave me speechless.

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isus
isus

brod na savi, Croatia



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nothing special. currently on earth somewhere. rather would be on moon. more..

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