On Your Way

Look what goes on around you
Think
What in the world can you do?
Look, see the world
Look at me
What do you want?
I do all I can
Yet, I try even harder
Never quit,
Don't take s**t
From anybody!
Your better than that
Don't give up
Try try try
Day after day
Never quit kid
Cause your on your way
To greatness
To have it all
Cause you shut them out
Came past the doubt
It's said you can be what you want to be
Untrue often times you'll see
But your future is up to you
You can do what you do
But every decision you make
Can come back to haunt you

Reviews

[Mysteryawaitsyou]

I completely agree wiv what chur trying to say chur an amazing writer :3

[Mindy]

This is a really good poem! I also enjoyed the ending.

[jay-lyse]

Determination is what everyone needs sometimes to see that what they want is worth the hard decisions that come along the way. Great Write

[♥Kaitlyn♥]

Really good. I love the ending.

[Clay Walden]

Amazing. I am beginning to use your work as a building block to start more of mine. Keep up the amazing work

[.........]

At first it's like a pep talk, but the end is kinda like, "hey, by the way? Just in case i'm wrong, i told you so!" I like it

[0_o Abbie]

Wow. Really deep. It seems this is true on so many levels.