Fatal

Haven't decided if I want to leave it a poem or add music and make it lyrics

Fatal

Your eyes alone can pierce my heart.
What once was strong, is weak.
You give and take your love from me,
Like a game of hide and seek.
You stand to show me paradise,
Then tear it all away.
You curse my name and turn your back,
To kiss me the next day.

You're fatal to me,
You cause more pain than love.
But I'm addicted to you
And what you're made up of.
You're no good for me, you break my heart,
But you just need to know...
My heart is yours, you have my soul,
And I can't let you go.

I've tried so hard to walk away
And save myself the pain.
You pull me back with promises,
Then throw me out again.
Yet every time you bat your eyes
And swear your words are true,
I let you hold me close because
I'm so in love with you.

You're fatal to me,
You cause more pain than love.
But I'm addicted to you
And what you're made up of.
You're no good for me, you break my heart,
But you just need to know...
My heart is yours, you have my soul,
And I can't let you go.

You're killing me, my hope for love;
You're splitting me in two:
A monster that can only hate,
And the girl in love with you.
It's hard to tell which one is which.
I fear I'll never know.
I'm so afraid of losing you,
But please, just let me go.

You're fatal to me,
You cause more pain than love.
And I'm addicted to you
And what you're made up of.
You're no good for me, you break my heart,
And this, I'm sure you know...
My heart, it's yours, you have my soul,
And I can't let you go.

Please just let me go.
♥


January, 2013

Reviews

[EdgarLovecraft]

well structured and good rhymes

[CharM105]

Wooow!!! I think we have that one person we know that is all wrong for us, but yet still can't let go.... Guess it's true what they say: 'We always want what we can't have' ;-)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I can kind of relate to this so this kinda hits at my heart.
I loved it the whole story line to it.
Its very deep and emotional.
Its like a battle with yourself that you always lose.
Very well written i loved it. :)

[Kate Howell]

You've done a chorus and bridge there so I'll call them lyrics. Add music because there very good :)