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Reviews

[TL Boehm]

It is the moment of goodbye. I once again am late to the dance. Miss you

[Moonie]

This poem definitely is in the realm of being absurd, and I say that with all due respect. In my 6 years on this site, this is the first poem that made me speechless. I couldn't find the meaning at first, I thought it was morse code at the first glance. But then I saw the picture of red blood cells. Now, I'm a med school graduate, currently pursuing Internal Medicine, and I have a fair knowledge about forensics. I interpret the exclamation marks as the blood spurts from arteries. (we are actually taught that the arterial blood makes exclamation mark-shaped stains)
I think it's the last minutes of someone's death, as the time between the blood spurts gets more and more. Pretty morbid, and pretty intriguing! I'm so pleased with myself that I figured it out!! :))