dreams

i was tryin to take a quick nap today...and it didnt work out.

 have u ever wanted to live in a dream

to have everything not in reality

never have to worry who would make u frown

or when trying to get back up they  push u back  down

a place were your heart wont brake

not even on the very first date.

beyond the games and the sweet talkin,

the pain, lies and the forgotten

and place were your tears will never be seen

for this special place wont take u if your mean

not wanting to wake up from this place

you now see the frown apon your face

for this is a dream a place were you go

to exscape from the hell for an hour or so. 

Author's Note

after tryin to take my nap i had words in my head i just threw them up...i dont know if any makes sence but hope you enjoy or not help me out if you want also! <3

Reviews

[Michael V]

You got some good things going on here. all you gotta do is sort the laundry and put it to wash!

[LostCauze[:P]]

Amazing, because i totally understand where you are coming from. Sleeping for me is like an escape from reality, and when im in deep depression all i want to do is sleep to escape. Only thing i kinda of didnt like was the if your mean part. It seemed out of place and it threw off the rhythm. Other than that this was an amazing poem.

[PhoeniX]

oh dang! now this is something i enjoyed every word of. brilliant!!

[DR3AM3R]

i really enjoyed reading this because its true but theres also some abstract thoughts in there bout how u would want ur life 2 b different somehow

[Wolfwind Words]

I think this was a wonderful idea! Had me thinking. I would suggest running it through a spell checker, but other then that i think it was great!
It's true, everyone has a place where they go to escape hell for a little while.
Great Write!