Brightest Star

Brightest Star

A Poem by JELLYCAT

Right now I'm sitting on dull memories,
Living a death as people often do.
But I don't want to shrivel up yet,
Or let these moments escape me.

'Never knew true friendship like this,
While alone I feel useless
with you I feel boundless.

Right now I'm holding onto your dear hand,
Smiling at a tomorrow spent with you.
But you can't wait I bet,
Or let time grow between us.

'Never knew blue skies shone like this,
While alone I never saw this
Without you the world is groundless.







© 2015 JELLYCAT



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So much sentiment. I love it, and I'm happy you have friends to bring this out in you. Bravo.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JELLYCAT

2 Years Ago

I'm so glad too :D thank you so much for reading
This is too cute :)
Rise and Shine.

Posted 2 Years Ago


JELLYCAT

2 Years Ago

:D thanks so much!
a sweet write,loved the image

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JELLYCAT

2 Years Ago

thank you for reading it x)
 wordman

2 Years Ago

you`re welcome
This is so sweet! i loved it, excellent poem, "While alone I feel useless, with you I feel boundless" totally my favorite lines. Keep it coming :) i'm rating 100 points, and adding to my favorites.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JELLYCAT

2 Years Ago

wow! thank you so much for the support x) I am happy you liked it that much. and yeah those are prob.. read more
Dani The Unreviewed

2 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
I am in love with your fist lines!
Keep it up!

Posted 2 Years Ago


JELLYCAT

2 Years Ago

aw thank you :)

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Added on July 18, 2015
Last Updated on July 18, 2015
Tags: friendship, life, together, company, experience, change, happiness

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JELLYCAT
JELLYCAT

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I write for myself, without filters. I don't write for the single purpose of being understood or getting approval, its more of a playground for me to improve my writing creatively outside of schoo.. more..

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