tenement roses.

tenement roses.

A Poem by jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

loving you means withstanding
the little knives
you use to cut away,
in sand-grain increments,
sliver after tiny sliver
of the innermost self
i foolishly placed in your palm


lip caught tight
between clenched teeth,
i listen to your latest volley,
transfixed,
watching the blood drop well
and slide unnoticed
along pale flesh that once withstood
only your fingertip caresses;


i stand
watching the inside
from the outside
held beyond the bubble
we once both lived in


© 2013 jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)



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well done...very intense!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Ouch! Deep breath after listening to this one. To have the tone of this one soooo right, you have to have seen it up close - perhaps personal. I don't envy either view at all

Posted 3 Years Ago



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jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)
jenniewren (J.W. Bouwman)

Vancouver, BC, Canada



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