God loves you !

This poem is actually dedicated to a friend named Tammy v and my mom and dad ... it's the real truth of how most Christians act to ...

        You feel yourself falling apart , rejected, 

    put down , and hurt, 

   you see how people revile  their self to you, 

you been hurt , 

you been put down , 

you feel like noone cares about you , 

you feel like there's no hope , 

you feel like there's nowhere else to turn , 

you dont know what to do anymore , 

Get up off your feet , 

Ask god what you should do , 

Get down on your hands and knees , and pray , 

You'll always win the battle , the Devil cant win , 

Put on the armor of god and rejoice , 

Don't listen to what people say , 

When your feeling down , 

Get down on your knees and pray , 

For God so loved the world, 

that he gave his only son for you and everyone around , 

SO sit down and think and rejoice , 

For god love's you so much . 

Author's Note

let me know what you think ...

Reviews

[TPK Stories]

The true meaning of what it means to be a child of God. Excellent.

[LadyNaida]

In this time that we are living is comforting to know that we have a God that cares and is waiting with open arms for those who want to transform their lives. Beautiful piece!

[Coyote Poetry]

"For God so loved the world,
that he gave his only son for you and everyone around ,
SO sit down and think and rejoice ,
For god love's you so much . "
I agree. We need prayer and thankfulness. A beautiful and positive poem.
Coyote

[Chris]

Their is strength in our faith ...and comfort when we need it.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is nice comforting work. Good piece for
people who need that pick me up.

[Girl With A Pen]

Amazing! So painful at first and you end it with a hint of submition and peace. Loved it!

[Valentine]

A truthful write. I wish more young people would turn to Him instead of drugs. Interesting write. Valentine

[Alma W. Reis]

I'm not a religious individual but I appreciate the spirituality. I can feel the desperation leaping off the words to meet that higher state.
Maybe have a reread and do some slight edits on the spelling and grammar?