Gave my brother hot sauce

just a funny poem i created hope you like it . its a kids poem i made another version of this so let me know if you like the first one or second one

         first version 

   I did a prank on my brother , 

It might of been so cruel , 

But it was so funny , 

It was so mean ,

but a  very funny prank , 

I gave my brother hot sauce told him it was ketchup ,

He put it on his sandwich , 

He went and took a big bite and went off crying , 

I was laughing , 

He ran to mommy, 

Oh no, 

I'm in trouble now, 

I better go run and hide. 

   second version 

   gave my brother hot sauce

oh me, 

oh my, 

i thought it would be funny to pull a prank on my brother, 

oh me, 

oh my, 

it might be oh so cruel, 

but oh so funny, 

it was mean, 

but still it was funny, 

this prank will go down in history, 

i gave my brother hot sauce and told him it was ketchup, 

he put it on his sandwich, 

and took a big old bite out of it, 

he ran off crying, 

i was laughing really hard, 

he ran to mommy, 

oh no, 

better run, 

i'm in trouble now, 

gotta run and hide before momma finds me 

 

Author's Note

hope you like this poem
please no rude comments

Reviews

[Ren Nightshade]

Haha I could see myself doing this to one of my little brothers and then getting caught in that same manner!

Great work I love the poem Jennifer!!!

[raj24]

PRANKS WITH OUR SIBLINGS ARE ALWAYS FUN N YOU HAVE EXPRESSED IT WITH LOT OF FUN, I ENJOYED READING IT ..KEEP READING N WRITING :)

[kitty]

A prank that might seem cruel but it conjurs up much laughter! Nice one!