I'll Make Love To You In Paradise,

another love poem

I’ll Make Love to you in paradise,

Oh baby,

My love,

My lover,

Come to me,

With a piece of mind.

Love me for who I am,

I will love you until that day of peace in minds,

Come baby,

Come to me,

Let’s go to paradise together,

I will love you until the day is gone,

I will wonder through the wilderness for you,

I’ll make love to you in the forest of peace in minds,

I love you baby and always will.

 

The end,

By: Jennifer little

Author's Note

i love this love poem

Reviews

[AnastasiaH]

Sounds so lovely and has a refreshing flow!

[ATG]

A very sweet and beautifully written poem. It made me think of someone strongly in love with someone else. The word choice in this was excellent and the overall flow of the poem was great.

[Marie]

Sounds like a good love long.

[Chris]

Love is unending - til it does end...
and then we have something else to write about.
Quite the circle...

[misscb]

Very sweet... Well done!!!

[Eleanor]

I really liked this.. Great job
-Eleanor

[McKenna B.]

very interesting!