The Sound in the Silence

The Sound in the Silence

A Poem by JB Murray

The Sound in the Silence…

By: JB Murray © 2012

 

 

It was there in the silence

I heard such a sound

One lonely heart beating

To this I was bound

 

The fear in the air

The worries and doubts

Of two broken hearts

Searching one out

 

The warmth of your body

The scent of your hair

A tender caress

A soft, subtle stare

 

Your ever sweet lips

And the taste of your skin

Old memories forgotten

When true love begins

 

No the stars did not listen

The night won’t forsake

The sound in the silence

That loving you makes


© 2012 JB Murray



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I'm always confused when I see a good poem such as this with hardly any reviews. This is a good poem. Love is not always easy to find and when we do find it, care and affection need to be taken. Nice rhymes in this, they flow well with the alliteration.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JB Murray

1 Year Ago

thank you... I appreciate the sentiment, and am glad you stumbled upon it!



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I'm always confused when I see a good poem such as this with hardly any reviews. This is a good poem. Love is not always easy to find and when we do find it, care and affection need to be taken. Nice rhymes in this, they flow well with the alliteration.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JB Murray

1 Year Ago

thank you... I appreciate the sentiment, and am glad you stumbled upon it!
Very sexy and intriguing. I like the idea of this poem, which is, in my view, about "touching" your love for the first time. I felt this way with my current boyfriend, very beautiful. Gratz on your placement in the Next Top Poet contest, by the way!

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is very beautiful. I am feeling the love you have for a certain someone special.....

Posted 5 Years Ago



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JB Murray
JB Murray

Orange, MA



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About me huh? Well... I am writer...go figure huh? Lol. I am writer in many ways. First and foremost, I am a singer/songwriter. But I also dabble in poety, essays, one liners, short stories, and .. more..

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