the best of the worst

the best of the worst

A Poem by jlh13

told to write my worst,

well this is a first

this is the 3rd line

in a long line of surprises

"that's life," surprise surprise,

i could never be great

in your eyes.

yet i still try,

o i try SO hard.

dosnt it make you want to cry?

© 2008 jlh13


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this might actually be the worst poem here... Hope for the best, or prepare $1,000

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very original piece. It's short, yet holds a lot of emotion. I liked the use of dialogue & the question at the end. Well written. (:

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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jlh13
jlh13

VA



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eh. not good at online profiles. but a little overview: i like hockey, i *used* to skateboard play guitar, but certain situations that i dont wanna get into prohibit me from playing as of late, and t.. more..

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A Poem by jlh13