Fallen...Again

Fallen...Again

A Poem by Jeff Loquist
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i've fallen again...
         into words
love-struck teenage desire
trip-fall down 
         slippery slopes
where wonderment
          meets
circumstance
          meets

                          quiet

          when everything changes
when the world turns
          more slowly
when the moon is
           always full
when you question
           everything
                 then i realize

i've fallen again
           for words



© 2010 Jeff Loquist


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. ahhhh ... emily's words say it all ... this is just so beautifully written and presented ... it's good to fall for words ... the best thing to do actually ... especially when you're so amazingly brilliant at it ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Liked this one...it kept me guessing until the end, as I thought it may have been about love at first. Like the layout and the clever use of the word "quiet" in small font in the middle of this piece......good write...

Posted 13 Years Ago


oh, me too

over and over and over again

it's good to see it through your eyes

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Jeff Loquist
Jeff Loquist

Baton Rouge, LA



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