above the sun

above the sun

A Poem by light years in love
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07/2012

"
                                               High above this charade of lies 
                                A battlefield wages that surpasses mindsets

                                               Here the Creator's adoration reaches
                               Past the limbo that captives us

                               To where who we were meant to be resides

                               A place untouched by the atramentous acroamatics 
                               Of many centuries of self generated cycles

                                              Gently nudging, He is trying to awake the willing

                                              Those who haven't forgotten
      
                                              That
        
                                              Angels fly above the sun


© 2012 light years in love



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You have not only used your brush to paint in my mind this morning you have expanded my vocabulary with exellent and perfect word choice. I like that it is not forced as I often see with unusual words. The fact that those particular choices are the only words that aptly describe your message even more intrigiung and display a depth of mind that is fascinating. Thank You for the read request. Always fullfilling reading your work.

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This is rich in metaphysical imagery and ideas, I love the ending, and also this theme. Great job :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


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An intriguing piece. Loved the ending:

"He is trying to awake the willing
Those who haven't forgotten
That
Angels fly above the sun"

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

amen

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's always amazing how big this universe is, and how powerful it is, and how powerful the God who made it is, and most of all how small we are within it . . . our whole human race is less than a flyspeck upon the cosmic canvas. It's absolutely staggering

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Joshua, this is a adorable poem. The poem opened up so much imagery/memory, this part here did that for me, (( that surpasses mindsets )) Makes me wonder when the human race will have a mind button, and in the on position, its like oh ok, this is better, lol... Love this, thank you, much appreciated... WS, the Conductor of the Poetry E Train...

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

liberating~beautiful spread of hope!~

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Amazing. Every time I come back to the cafe I am amazed by the leaps and bounds I see in your writing. This is truly breath-taking.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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You are able to write in a very 'grand' way, I am not sure just how you do it, but I've noticed this.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My eyes were opened to that trueth a long time ago. Now I simply struggle to walk the path. I enjoyed this.

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