hereafter

05/2013 (Blood type B: Installment Fourteen)

Here comes the darkness of the dawn

the lies within a sunrise

lucid in its forthcoming

my skin burns in its imminence

though I will not run

I will cling to you

withstanding in your shade

till the skies are ablaze

even until my flesh is afire

then will I take journey

whence I came

Whenever you think of me

do not sift through the ashes

remember my endearment

Whenever you picture me

I hope that I am smiling

that the weight of sorrow

twas ever present in my eyes

is no more, liken to

the times you spoke

of your affections

I have loved you an immortal's lifetime

Hereunder I have shown

how much more

would have I hereafter

 

Reviews

[Corset]

The fascination of love between beauty and beast is ever so poignant in this write it's almost tangible, someone who sees past our faults and into the love beneath our frailties, our mortality. This reminds me of the "Twilight" series. Except I think it might actually be better written version of how that immortal love might feel. My favorite stanza:

Whenever you picture me
I hope that I am smiling
that the weight of sorrow
twas ever present in my eyes
is no more, liken to
the times you spoke
of your affections

[joshua deathdealer]

Thank you so much. It is the last chapter of Blood Type B or what I like to call bloodlust poetry.

[Corset]

It is very beautiful and my pleasure, I have subscribed so i can return at a later date to read more of you ;)

[Muse]

remember my endearment. I fancy that line. It's like saying remember the ghost of me...it never ceases to exist...my love is eternal despite our mortality.

Beautiful penning, yet strangely melodic.