my mistake

my mistake

A Poem by joshua deathdealer
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08/2011

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I'm sorry, I thought I knew you
and I didn't mean to stare but
was that a smile of recognition
right before the hateful glare

No..your right, your not her
the girl I knew was full of hope
your possessed and full of anger
barely able to cope

Promise me that if you see her
you'll tell her that I'm sorry and I really care 
and that I miss her looking back at me
from the mirror we used to share 

© 2011 joshua deathdealer



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I like this poem. Made your point with gentle and kind words. Hard to watch people change directions. I like the ending. Always good to leave with kindness and a open door for the good people in a life. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


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I know this feeling and, tragedically, my ex-ex boyfriend knows how it made me feel. You can keep coming back, but you can't take away the hurt!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awe this poem make me smile. I liked the point within it too. It is hard to see people you love change right before you. I have seen it. My friends have seen it. I've changed a lot and my friends didn't like it. They stuck by me though. So yeah....I can relate to this poem. Thanks for sharing. :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a complex poem
everyone makes mistakes sadly


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Favorited.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The mirror...no reflection is devastating. And perhaps it is because she lost hers?
To...finding..
masqued^^..excellent

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oooooo awesome, sweet cute heartbreak.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really gentle and almost sad. Made me think xx

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brilliant and beautiful, 100/100 c:

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very nice poem I love it....I love the first stanza........ thanks for the rr.... ^^,


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aw, one deep writing... :(
"I'm sorry, I thought I knew you" Gotta love that line!!!
Thanks for sharing this...I enjoyed reading it... :)))

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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joshua deathdealer

Casket City, FL



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"My trepidation of things past is not a song with a beginning, middle and end. But an endless symphony playing infinite variations on the same theme. One day of sadness fades into another and the .. more..

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