4 letter word

4 letter word

A Poem by Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)
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love is

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love is
4 letters
joined together
nestled together
cuddled together
living together
doing together
caring each other
moulded to each other
devoted to each other
4 letters
2 people
joined
one word
love
let it be
love
not hate
love is 4 letters
also
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© 2017 Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)


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Thanks barley gal
I'm at work now

Posted 6 Years Ago


Interesting word play to describe what love might feel like to some . . . it feels like a ball that rolls & bounces along, landing on various ideas, but moving on quickly to the next . . . the ending is powerful despite the brevity (((HUGS)))

Posted 6 Years Ago


Avia and Annette thanks so very much for reads and reviews

Posted 6 Years Ago


Yes! This is a stellar thought and poem. All the things love is- great repetition of "together" and "each other" for emphasis of two people joining as one. "4 letters..2people..one word..love". Love/hate- choose Love ! Minimalist, concise, eloquent, perfect-last two lines transcendent. Great Beatles reference-"Let it be". Just love this Julie!

Posted 6 Years Ago


4 letters, love not hate. The way it describes the word love is very nice.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

Sydney , Australia



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Amateur old poet well not that old but not a young 20 anymore I live to write I write at least five poems ditties every weekend and a few during week I write quickly it just flows and bu.. more..

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