Once Stolen

Once Stolen

A Poem by justjenn_2u
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Overcoming Rape

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Dead and cold eyes
sometimes they remind me

 

Hard and mad soul
sometimes all I can see

 

Evil and clutching teeth

sometimes reveal your hate

 

Growling, cold voice
sometimes reminds my fate

 

Unwounded skin
sometimes leaves my soul broke

 

Blood on the cross
so glad my soul awoke


© 2012 justjenn_2u



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I couldn't believe I actually shivered when I read this piece. Now THAT is powerful writing.
The pain that must be felt during and afterward is unimaginable to me. As is with those who have never been there. I bow with the deepest respect to those who stand up and move ahead with their lives.

Very well done, Jenn

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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i love this one.. ive noticed you have a consistant style.. i was thrown off by 'memory' until I read it was your sons. lol. but you can tell where he gets it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

justjenn_2u

4 Years Ago

Thanks. Yes, he is just beginning. Thanks for the review. I hope he develops his skills as he has.. read more
I agree with El Juero..........the tension builds and builds then end with a glorious burst of hope. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I couldn't believe I actually shivered when I read this piece. Now THAT is powerful writing.
The pain that must be felt during and afterward is unimaginable to me. As is with those who have never been there. I bow with the deepest respect to those who stand up and move ahead with their lives.

Very well done, Jenn

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Six outstanding stanzas. I like how the tension builds, and at the end, a flourish of hope and faith.

Posted 5 Years Ago


What a painful horror... a fearful ache that arose... the cold evil that tried to devour all joy... all hope... all life... And yet, your last lines speak profoundly of the cross, and freedom, and new life... Powerfully moving, dear friend...

Posted 5 Years Ago


"...blood on the cross
so glad my soul awoke"
very deep piece. Thanks for sharing

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

heavy hitter here sister. If this is in fact reflections of your tag line - then it isn't nearly as harsh as one would think, and your heart will take many more outbursts to begin the cleansing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Really well written. You have expressed the emotion well. I particularly like "Evil and clutching teeth sometimes reveal your hate". Excellent write.

Posted 5 Years Ago


WOW, so nicely written, deep write.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Very deep and moving work..love this


Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on November 18, 2011
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justjenn_2u

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I write from my heart. I follow my instinct. I live impulsively. I never feel like my feet are firmly grounded as I am a free spirit. I am a very intuitive person, sometimes to the point it hurts .. more..

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