Uncertain

Uncertain

A Poem by Kajal Sharma
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about my confused experiences with life and failure to understand what i am heading towards

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It feels like I'm always in a rush
I'm doing a lot yet left so much
I don't know where I'm heading to
just running I'm just through

I just want to close my eyes
may should I relax a while
I guess Frost just said it right
We all are fighters we have to fight

Woods may be lovely, dark and deep
even though there are no promises to keep
I just can't stop by the grooves
because you know its lot to prove

I took the road less traveled
no regret but i feel crippled
there no way to go back
How many times do i pack unpack?


© 2015 Kajal Sharma



Author's Note

Kajal Sharma
I'm just a beginner but I want to go a long way..

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love the allusions to Frost and his work... one of the most difficult things to do nowadays is to slow down, to unpack for the long haul and simply enjoy what life offers us... we have so many things pulling at us in different directions that it is difficult to see beauty around us when all we catch are blurred glimpses of life as it passes us by... your poem has inspired deep thought, Kajal...thanks for sharing!

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Kajal Sharma

2 Years Ago

thank you so much for such a great review
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2 Years Ago

you are welcome!


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Hadn't read this one, now I wish I had read it first. It is a great poem. Sometimes we just feel like something is wrong, but we don't know what's it is, or what he have done wrong or what we haven't done right.

Posted 2 Years Ago


And its a poem that relates to life. making choices, not sure of outcomes. keep on the good work.


I took the road less traveled
no regret but i feel crippled
there no way to go back
How many times do i pack unpack?

Sweet!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


wow. I like it. The uncertainty of life. Robert Frost-The Road not taken: you are very creative.

The wording is on point.The flow is very fast: pacing. I like it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


A short write, yt full of impact....
Jst work on ur style nd vocabulary, nd u will indeed go a long way...
:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Robert Frost is one of the most prolific writers in the history of the world...and I think he would smile to see you have read his poetry

Posted 2 Years Ago


You wanna go a long way huh? well, if you keep sharing poetry like this, then you will! :) awesome poem, i can relate. 100 points. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Nice poem... thought provoking!
Great 'beginning' for a 'beginner'...

Posted 2 Years Ago


Kajal Sharma

2 Years Ago

thank you Terry
I enjoyed the poem. Good thoughts and quote.
"We all are fighters we have to fight

Woods may be lovely, dark and deep
even though there are no promises to keep"
Above lines are true. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


very nice job, first few lines describe me

Posted 2 Years Ago


Kajal Sharma

2 Years Ago

thank uh so much if uh like dis one check out the one titled 'kill your girl child'
Liked this though I have a slightly different view. Nothing stops us from relaxing and slowing down. It is our mind which makes us believe that there is no other option. Calm the mind and you will be rewarded with a relaxed life style

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Kajal Sharma
Kajal Sharma

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My name is Kajal Sharma. I love to do anything in which i can be creative. My interests are writing, reading, drawing, cooking, karaoke, dancing. I started writing when I was 12 years old. My love for.. more..

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