DANCING IN THE RAIN

Cold droplets

On my back

Each one hits

I am aware

Harder faster

More and more

The rain comes quick

I hold my arms out

And take a swirl

The cold rain eases

My aching mind

My hair hangs down

My clothes are soaked

The beautiful Sweet rain

Washes away the pain

 

Dance little girl dance

Reviews

[Celtic Cat]

Oh I LOVE this!!!!! It's so wonderful....and brings back many memories of enjoying the rain instead of begrudging it!! I can picture you twirling in the drops from heaven....smiling and taking in the wonders of the world. An absolutley FANTASTIC write!!! ....dance little girl dance!!!!

[Adela Muresan]

If only the rain could really wash away the pain �

Cheers! Nice job.

[Emily B]

Some days I love the rain. I will get soaked to the very bone with great pleasure if I know i can change my clothes and get warmed up afterwards. There is something about the rain that washes away a clouded mind.