love is evol

love is evol

A Poem by Kayla Etreni

Love is love,

We all want it,

We all fall into it,

But at times,

We feel it with the wrong person.

Love can hurt you,

Leave deep scares in your life,

Some that you will never forget,

So I guess in ways,

Love, is in fact, evol.

 

© 2011 Kayla Etreni


Author's Note

Kayla Etreni
love is evol spelt backwrads. <3

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this is good,:) !its true.. love is evol.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hmm i like it. I thinkk it was short and got to the point but made me want to read it. Great job Loving the evol

Posted 12 Years Ago


Simply put, but very true. Just one correction you may want to make - "scars" instead of "scares"? Another great poem!

Posted 12 Years Ago


hehe i like it and i like how you made love sound evol :3

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love = evol nice wordplay
well said good flow

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OMG THIS IS SOOO TRUE!!!! love is truly evol...... but it can be just love at times... bbut at other times its evol!! nice!!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Kayla Etreni
Kayla Etreni

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