You make me proud to be me...

You make me proud to be me.

from what i can see,

you take me up,

and bring me back down,

down to earth,

where i can grow,

grow into somthing else,

somthing wonderful?,

maybe so,

you make me proud to be me.

Author's Note

i acualy love you. :$ <3

Reviews

[Ami N.]

So sweet :) Well written; however, I would suggest running spell-check. There are several spelling mistakes, but the idea behind the poem was nice. Overall, nicely done :)

[Harmonica winds]

so sweet and delightful, nicely expressed

[paradise]

Awwhe thats so cute that reminds me of me and my friend I love it great job

[paparapapa]

Aaw. One of the sweetest things a guy can do is to make you proud of yourself. The bring me down part was really good. I thought it was going to be a turning point but apparently, it was just an amazing and interesting twist. Good job. :)

[emma]

really cute and sweet.

[Susanna F]

Lovely image of a healthy relationship. I like the up/down movement and the repeat of the end of one line at the beginning of the next. Great flow and very exhilarating read!

[hayleee.]

I . love. this.