Why you dont matter.

Three O'clock in the morning, and here i am, still awake.
Wishing that what happened was fake.
Wishing i could just fall asleep in your arms.
Wishing my heart wasn't torn.
You could have just told me the truth,
instead you cut me loose.
It not that you didnt care,
Its that i don't think its fair.
I wanted you to be just mine,
but you didnt want me. Thats fine.
Ill find someone else.
Someone whose okay with thereself.

Reviews

[Krazy On The Outside]

In the first line the 'I' should be capitalized and so does the one in the third line.In the seventh line "It" should be "It's" and the "Its in the next line should be "It's" and then the the "I" should be capitalized also. And in the next line "didnt" should be didn't and also"Thats" shoild be That's. And in the next line "Ill" should be I'll. In the next line "whose" should be who's and "thereself" should be theirself. I'm sorry, I sound like a grammer snob. =( I don't mean anything by it.
I really like the poem though. It's a great piece. =)

[nostal]

Well written and nice.

[ace]

good emotion well written you seem to loose the rhyme at times though and i think it hurts the flow of the piece over all good work though