Ashes to Ashes

Ashes to Ashes

A Poem by Tayler
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There is no description, simply because I don't know why or how :) It's simply a poem

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Ashes to Ashes,

Tumble to the ground,

Stars falling

All around.

 

Scar to Scar

Fiery might

Rain from the sky

In opaque delight

 

Dream to Dream,

Sleep by day,

Wake by night

Nothing more to say

 

Desires to Reality

Crimson lust

into long awaited journy

Fallen away in silvery dust

 

Dance to Dance

Listen to your muse,

Filled with secrets,

Meant to fuse.

 

Love to Love,

Simply to do,

Spread the flames,

given to you

 

Fly to fly,

Feel the air,

Spread your wings,

So sweet and fair

 

Live to Live,

In the now,

And not the then,

Love to Live

© 2009 Tayler


Author's Note

Tayler
I have no idea, it's like I closed my eyes and wrote.

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I like this. I like the flow and feel. My favorite lines are ...

Dance to Dance

Listen to your muse,

Filled with secrets,

Meant to fuse.


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love how you compare things to themselves.
I think it is an amazing poem!
I love it.
Your one love isn't captalized and whenever you compared the things it was captalized.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your flow is absolutely amazing. As is your rhyme.
And I like how your last stanza closes the poem.
:D

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the last part, it's something you said to me once.... i went back and read it again and i wonder....

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Whoa! Now this is just plain atunning in flow!
Such vivid imagery, like the emotion you put into this write.
Very well written!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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the flow of this is wonderful the repetition is almost perfect i get so lost in the flow i almost forget to pay attention to what im reading i actually had to read it twice to get it all very very well done

Posted 10 Years Ago


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This was very pretty. I wish I could close my eyes and write as well as this. xP

I loved the last 'paragraph'.

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