The Uneasy Partner

I just called you

as you like it

never knowing that

you have lost  both the ears

It is unbelievable for me

that you never cared

When the moon turns red

and the sky turns blue

Your face turns  solid rock?

all your promises flee?

I am just an ordinary mortal

never trying to fathom

the mountain how big or tall

How can I know?

At last you throw me into a free fall?

Reviews

[Liza]

interesting - the opening stanza was simple yet profound...

I just called you
as you like it
never knowing that
you have lost both the ears

- this piece represents to me of a lover expecting another to be predictable as they were in the beginning or continue to use the same stimulation for a response through the conditioning.

- this feels to me that this is a fickle lover; while their counterpart is very loyal to serve yet not valued.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Sometimes we feel we are just not getting through, penned magnificently!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. Direct statements and no wasted words. When the emotion of a woman is lock down. Only escape is to run before it can get worst. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Ripple of Aqua]

Termoil and heart break I'd what the broken trust in any relationship would be like. I love the morals and the use of metaphors that are placed here. Excellent.

[Daytonight]

Very lovely. Well done. Keep on penning.

[GlamGirl]

Wow! This is your best poem yet I think!

[Becky C Strukamp]

Emotionally packed. Love it!!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

I like the reflective surace of thoughts expressed within the body of your poem~ a very gentle questing toward understanding the motivations of another~