clean exit

VERY VERY VERY SHORT I KNOW.... its about testing a relationship... if u need further explination just ask

Clean Exit

 

Everything new fades.

My desires no exception.

After the glow left

so did I.

And I wasn't surprised

though pained

when he never tried to follow.

Author's Note

leave muh spelling/grammer/length ALONE!! BLAH BLAH BLAH. "This sucks" is an acceptable review. "this is too short" IS NOT! lol! so HAVE AT IT!

Reviews

[speakingcolors]

perfect length. perfect words. perfect.

[James Horsley]

Not exactly sure what's going on as far as your subject matter goes. A plea for empathy maybe? Sounds a bit like a struggle with your own emotions.
Either way, you've set up an excellent feel and structure for this piece. Choice of words is spot on.

[Andrew Glass]

It's always hard when one we care for suddenly decides they don't feel the same, even if we were expecting it. But that's why we must move on and find someone new; someone who will actually care for us like we deserve to be... Overall, this is an effective piece. Short, simple and to the point. Good work.