The act.

A look at writing something sexual, without being vulgar, I've left this available for everyone to read, becasue as it does suggest something, it never refers directly to it!

Crafted hands mould muscles to tender softness,

Fingers caress skin of milk and velvet rich,

My back spasms at delight of his touch,

A moan, solid and low for only his ears my pitch.

 

Kisses float on lips of liars and of truths,

Bodies hardening against sweat and feeling,

Shoulders high as hands laid rest upon them,

Pushing in seduction and suggestions of kneeling.

 

Fantastic groans, like a farm aminal in heat,

He thrusts bulging organs against wetness,

Vacum creates tension at the back of my throat,

Playful fingers discover lines of skin of tightness.

 

Legs open and standing straight with upturned toes,

He rocks and shivers in excitment now relaxed  in flow,

I pulse and heat and go quicker with my rythm,

How funny that something is bastardised as in blow!

Author's Note

Be Honest!

Reviews

[Chris]

line 3 - "at" ? similar "distractions" at other places too. I sensed the intent but question the tepid facts but less emotion-full happenings. Its not the hetero or gay depiction I question... its the emotion-less that turns me away. Sex feels good OR we wouldn't do it (whatever the it is) near as much. But without emotional impact it becomes an inconsequential act without beauty, satisfaction, or release.

Heat without crudity is achievable and desireable... and memorable too.

Chris

[Amila Jay]

A wonderful write :)

[jkhatz]

Steamy, sexy, lusty, you certainly did write a picture perfect description of 'The act' without using any vulgarities. As this is the first piece of yours I've read, allow me to say how very much impressed and delighted I am by your considerable talent. You are a rare find!!

[Laura Storm]

Honestly...haha wonderful. I love the way it hints without saying. It makes it clean enough for well minded people and erotic enough for those who wish to take it as such.

[Muse]

A lot of my erotica has no mature rating...it's only dirty if you want it to be. I say nothing wrong..or vulgar..or suggestive. It's all in the reader's head. If you want to keep it clean..then read it clean. Otherwise..sit back..and enjoy the ride. lol

[freelancejouster]

*vacuum
i thought the poem was quite wonderful, warm and pulsing as it should be. the last line detracts from it, somehow making the whole thing less powerful and sensual.

[Coyote Poetry]

No weakness in this poem. I like the poetry that make you think and look at the words with question. Your poem allow the reader to know the desire without describing each part of the act. A good writer can direct the reader. You did. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

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I think this sits on the edge of erotica..there are powerful suggestions and images created as you feel (pardon the pun) as you feel your way through the stanzas and the emotions..powerfully seductive read

[Ruth]

I agree with you...leave it for all to read...too much emphasis is put on "mature" rating...I understand it and do so myself but this is sensually warming and portrayed in an elegantly thought out manner!
Beautifully written love, glad to read you again, love your work xoxo

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

lol......

you made something dirty seem lighthearted and amusing