Yes

One white daisy

You gave to me

Swung me around

Under the cherry tree

We walked together

Your hand in mine

The clouds parted

The sun began to shine

Butterflies danced

My heart began to sing

Then you knelt down

With a diamond ring

I jumped into your arms

Nodding my head "yes"

Soon the day would come

When I'd wear my wedding dress

Author's Note

Inspired by Hundred More Years which is one of my favorite songs. :) Oh, and I didn't know what to do for titles, so if you have any different suggestions, I'd appreciate it. :)

Reviews

[Liz]

I REALLY like this one. The flow is just amazing. I find it very interesting that you were able to come up with this from a song.
You told a sweet, beautiful story and the whole poem just made me smile (:

[misha]

Aww, this is really sweet. I love it. Keep up the work!

[White Ink]

Awww very sweet, refreshing, lovely and beautiful!!!!

Thanks for making me smile :)

[Short.Nerd]

THis was cute:) Nice job.

[akapr17other]

Well this is adorable. Your description really helps the reader see what you want them to see. Good job delivering the story in a very pleasant and light way.

[Krystal Nicole]

beautifully written! Great Job!!!

[~Lizzy♬]

Another beautiful writing. I love how the words flowed together with each other. :)

~Lizzard~

[Tate Morgan]

I imagine this the dream of all secret hears that long for the love of life to find them

[Erinne S.]

I like the title you gave it! And I loved this peom! It was so sweet :)

~Erinne