Success

Success

A Poem by Riddhi
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This is a poem from my soul and heart.....

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Someone said earning honour is success ,
Other said earning money is success , 
Yet another said earning position in society is success ,
But i said
Earning happiness is what is success.

                                                                 Success is the enchanting word ,
                                                                 the bewildering noun ,
                                                                 the horrifying feeling ,
                                                                 and the beautiful treasure.

For what a student wakes till night
Takes water on his sleepy face and again studies ,
A dancer though tired
practices his dance ,
A musician pains his throat
But again and again sings his song ,
This is success.

                                                               The meaning of success might vary ,
                                                                But the centre of attraction it offers
                                                                is the same be it Anne or Mary ,
                                                      
Someone wise said
Running behind money is what makes you mad
but in every work searching for satisfaction , 
is what makes your every reaction a successful action.........

© 2016 Riddhi



Author's Note

Riddhi
This is what means success to me and i am eager to welcome your suggestions .....

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I like the structure of this poem. Not a typical structure, but effective for this work.

Too many people now a days put money as their success in life and I have never been one to use that method. This work shows what a really great way of thinking of one's personal and emotional success really contains. Great work!

Posted 3 Days Ago


Riddhi

3 Days Ago

Thank you...I am happy that you liked it..
Jordan Smith

3 Days Ago

You are welcome! Keep it up!
beautiful poem, Success is the enchanting word ,
the bewildering noun ,
the horrifying feeling ,
and the beautiful treasure.
loved this line! Success is all just the way we see us, success is in every peaceful sleep, success is in getting three meals a day. Wonderfully written!!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Riddhi

3 Days Ago

Thank you..I am happy that you liked it..
This is what happiness to me, if you are happy then you are successful, money is a mere piece of paper, no worries about that, what makes me worry is lack of smile on their lips with my fellows,...sorry it was lengthy..but well done.
Thank you Riddhi for sharing your success with us..haha..

Posted 1 Year Ago


Riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thanks for your review...
nice visualization I enjoyed this ever much.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thanks for your kind words...
Riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thanks for your kind words...
You are so correct! Happiness is success, it is the key to life! Great job!!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Riddhi

2 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind words....
A Humble Poet

2 Years Ago

Well you definitly deserve them!
this poem is really fantastic .....

Posted 2 Years Ago


Riddhi

2 Years Ago

Thank you !!!!!!
"Earning happiness is what is success"
Nice work!! :)
Keep on writing :) :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Riddhi

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much...
Prantik Ali

2 Years Ago

You're welcome!
Prantik Ali

2 Years Ago

You're welcome!
"Earning happiness is what is success"
Nice work!! :)
Keep on writing :) :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Great write and a wise write..
Love your ideas and views about success ;)

Good use of words too.. Keep writing more and i'm sure that success will come to you! ;)

Looking forward to read more of your works! Thanks for sharing! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Riddhi

2 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing....
Amazing combination of words to make it a sensible and outstanding piece of writing.Keep it up. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Riddhi

2 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing...
Hitarth Raval

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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I am Riddhi , a 17 year old girl , a proud Indian...My friends say that i am antic but i am not antic rather i am unique..I am queen of mood swings and its really difficult to handle me...I love trave.. more..

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