Success

Success

A Poem by Riddhi
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This is a poem from my soul and heart.....

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Someone said earning honour is success ,
Other said earning money is success , 
Yet another said earning position in society is success ,
But i said
Earning happiness is what is success.

                                                                 Success is the enchanting word ,
                                                                 the bewildering noun ,
                                                                 the horrifying feeling ,
                                                                 and the beautiful treasure.

For what a student wakes till night
Takes water on his sleepy face and again studies ,
A dancer though tired
practices his dance ,
A musician pains his throat
But again and again sings his song ,
This is success.

                                                               The meaning of success might vary ,
                                                                But the centre of attraction it offers
                                                                is the same be it Anne or Mary ,
                                                      
Someone wise said
Running behind money is what makes you mad
but in every work searching for satisfaction , 
is what makes your every reaction a successful action.........

© 2016 Riddhi



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Author's Note

Riddhi
This is what means success to me and i am eager to welcome your suggestions .....

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well crafted and with a few very important truisms.... I enjoyed the reading and the subsequent pondering it stimulated.......... Neville

Posted 16 Hours Ago


Interesting format. It was fun to read:)

Posted 2 Months Ago


Riddhi

2 Months Ago

Thank you..
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Enjoyed it. Success can mean so many different things to so many different people. I think that making a success in life is to be content with what you have and what you have achieved. Family is success. Work is success. Money is success. Maintaining ones values is success. Comes down to who you are and what you value; (Anne of Mary).
Keep it up. A nice read

Posted 2 Months Ago


Riddhi

2 Months Ago

Yeah..I do agree with you and thanks for your review...
Success is truly what you make of it!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Riddhi

2 Months Ago

Hmm...I agree with you...
The way you make words rhyme is very cute and magical. I like the simple language that is used to state profound ideas. Keep going.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Riddhi

2 Months Ago

Thank you Kichu...
I like your visual choice of creating a typography aesthetic. They say that intention could launch a whole bunch of perspectives. What if you put all of the stanzas on the right side, why not the left? You chose to make a statement by separating the lines. That could put a whole bunch of meaning into each individual stanzas and really draw on the strength of each line individually. Nice prose!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Riddhi

2 Months Ago

Thank you..I am glad that you liked it..
You wrote a wise piece of poetry. Keep up the great work!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Riddhi

3 Months Ago

Thanks for your review...
John

2 Months Ago

Your welcome. Thanks so much!
I like the structure of this poem. Not a typical structure, but effective for this work.

Too many people now a days put money as their success in life and I have never been one to use that method. This work shows what a really great way of thinking of one's personal and emotional success really contains. Great work!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Riddhi

3 Months Ago

Thank you...I am happy that you liked it..
Jordan Smith

3 Months Ago

You are welcome! Keep it up!
beautiful poem, Success is the enchanting word ,
the bewildering noun ,
the horrifying feeling ,
and the beautiful treasure.
loved this line! Success is all just the way we see us, success is in every peaceful sleep, success is in getting three meals a day. Wonderfully written!!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Riddhi

3 Months Ago

Thank you..I am happy that you liked it..
This is what happiness to me, if you are happy then you are successful, money is a mere piece of paper, no worries about that, what makes me worry is lack of smile on their lips with my fellows,...sorry it was lengthy..but well done.
Thank you Riddhi for sharing your success with us..haha..

Posted 1 Year Ago


Riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thanks for your review...

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