A LETTER TO TERRORISTS - THE  MURDERERS OF PEACE

A LETTER TO TERRORISTS - THE MURDERERS OF PEACE

A Poem by riddhi
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A reaction to Nice attack of France.....

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Shedding the blood of innocent ,
is what happened in France in recent.
Many in Bangladesh you slaughtered ,
many innocents you murdered.
A letter to the terrorists this is ,
A letter to the murderers of peace this is.

Sad is the thing you get happiness by killing ,
you get happiness by blood shedding.
You are not a human ,
You are more than even a demon.
A letter to the terrorists this is ,
A letter to the murderers of peace this is.

Can you tell me what was the mistake ?
of the people whose lives you take.
Can you tell me what problem you had?
That terror missions you always laid.
A letter to the terrorists this is ,
A letter to the murderers of peace this is .

Merciless killing is what you like ,
making thousands of kids orphan by killing their parents is what you like.
Spreading hatredness is what you like ,
seeing the flood of blood of innocents is what you like.
A letter to the terrorists this is ,
A letter to the murderers of peace this is .

You are not the culprit of only those who were killed ,
you are the culprit of all Muslims whose soul you killed.
Allah never gets happy by seeing the graves of his children You made every person look with a vision of hate to a Muslim.
Because of a handful of you ,
whole Islam religion's respect and glory is destroyed by you
A letter to the terrorists this is ,
A letter to the murderers of peace this is .

You did a sin against humanity ,
You kill all with a vast rapidity ,
But mind you the world will not listen ,
but put your hatredness in prison .
Killing you is a very easy death ,
And you are not worth of it ,
What you think by killing people you can rule this world ??
If you are thinking so , your ambition is in mud.
A letter to the terrorists this is ,
A letter to the murderers of peace this is.

Do you want this world under your rule?????
RULE , RULE the barren world , RULE !!!!
Because no human will accept your rule.
Do you want this world under your rule?????
RULE , RULE the soil  , air and water RULE!!!
Because even , birds and plants won't accept your rule.
A letter to the terrorists this is ,
A letter to the murderers of peace this is.

You think you won by killing people everywhere ??
Let me tell you the stupidity you have is rare.
I will not do the mistake by saying you an animal ,
Because the language of love and peace is known even by an animal.
Terror is what you like ,
But mind you, the day is not far when all of your lives will be on a permanent strike.
A letter to the terrorists this is ,
A letter to the murderers of peace this is...............




© 2016 riddhi



Author's Note

riddhi
This was what i wrote after the recent attack in Nice , France and also to the attack which happened in a cafe of Bangladesh....I hope you all like it.....

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I didn't like the opening two paragraphs. I felt that it was a rather ambiguous and slow start. I was about the third and fourth para didn't appeal much to me either, just as I was about to close the poem; I noticed the last two paragraphs: Both of which absolutely floored me. WOW.

Yes, terrorists would only be ruling a barren land as no human would be ready to occupy it.
Even animals and plants advocate peace in their own way. But, Let me tell you, there is rampant violence and slaughter even in the animal kingdom. Watch a few NAT GEO documentaries on lions and their pedigree to understand what I mean.

Also, I feel it is unfair to Muslims and Islam as a religion to be the only one associated with terror. There is a certain section in their ideology which is misinterpreted. THis Misinterpretation is what is causing all this violence. If you had seen 'My name is Khan'. There is a certain scene which addresses this head on.

I could feel the wrath in your voice, this poem is one written from the heart. I appreciate that.
Keep writing :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thanks for reviewing and i assure you that i will definitely try to improve more in my next writing... read more



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this poem is very timely..thank you for writing such great poem, it will serve as an eye opener to everyone to embrace peace, and love for humanity..:)

Posted 1 Month Ago


riddhi

1 Month Ago

Thank you..
Very well articulated. A powerful message and enough emotion to make the reader stand still and absorb your message. if only the rest of the world saw through your eyes here.

Well done

Posted 8 Months Ago


riddhi

8 Months Ago

Thank you..
I love this. It really speaks to me. You have a few grammatically errors. Find, "The Little Brown Handbook ADA style." You should publish this. We are in time where people need peace, then take time to listen. Thank you for you beautiful words.

Posted 9 Months Ago


riddhi

9 Months Ago

Thanks for your review and spending your precious time in reading my poem....
Unlike some reviewers here I feel that it is not the style in which this is written that makes this powerful or not. It is rather the incredible message it sends to all those who would feel they have the right to kill.
It goes further and sends an equally powerful message to those who feel you can tar everyone with the same brush. You hope the reader likes it. The reader should be grateful. It is not a poem to be liked. It is a poem to educate.

Posted 9 Months Ago


riddhi

9 Months Ago

Actually what you said is true i too feel so..I am not among those writers who can make his reader l.. read more
Well written, I like this poem a lot and it flows really nicely.

Posted 11 Months Ago


riddhi

10 Months Ago

Thanks for your review...
ya i agree to the previous reviews
this is a very important topic and the way aimed it is very good
the last two paragraphs are just beatiful there flow is quite perfect saying that i move on the upper parragraphs there peotic tool is a bit weak they could be added with a more peotrical style and symetry
all in all it is a beatiful peace of peotry deeply loved it

your frnd
siddhi

Posted 11 Months Ago


you have conveyed it so intensely , expressing grief , sorrow .... the way you write is flawless

terrorism has nothing to do with RELIGION
the media has glorified it that way

well conveyed !!
thanks for sharing


Posted 11 Months Ago


According to me, you gives the formation of words to every Indians feeling.... Your writing is really good and improved... thanks!

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thanks for your review akki.....
You have chosen an awesome topic to debate on. Suddenly you took me to those situations...thanks for sharing, I enjoyed reading this master piece

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thanks for your review.. I'm happy that you liked it....
Ayushi Beura

1 Year Ago

My pleasure
Hard to understand these attacks. The terrorist attack their own people. Killing Muslim Arabs in their home land. I wish I had the answer to why you would kill women and children. The men of terror want to create fear. We must be fearless like Paris. Cannot allow them to win. Your words powerful and sad.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thanks for your review....
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome.

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