Sanity

I'm losing my sanity
Its slowly deteriorating
I feel empty
almost hollow like
I see shadows
And creatures
Demons crawling on my walls
I hear voices inside my head
Talking to me
Yelling at me
Screaming at each other
I try to sleep but I can't
They keep me awake with there chilling whispers
I can feel them staring at me
touching me with cold dead hands
Telling me I am one of them
The smell of death is strong
I am swallowed by my fear
I need help out
Cause I'm
Slowly
Loosing
My
Mind

Reviews

[Brianna]

Its a good start! I also think you could add way more descriptive words and feelings and what not to it. I get the plot i get the story, but I wish I could feel it more! Anyways I think the intention is very good and I like it I hope you keep on writing and continue to grow! You can only get better! woot woot! Keep on trying

Love Your Best Best Friend Friend
Brianna