CALCULATED NONSENSE

CALCULATED NONSENSE

A Poem by kublakhan27
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Join me if you will
on a bestriding of the fringes
scaling a most spastic inquisition
of implicit twinges
selling out to the intentions
of an underlined discretion
with an exclamation of dissent
declining pats of intervention
Sling me if you will
around the indirection of imposing
disillusion bent on belching out
a drown in a reactive hosing
down of drearily insipid ruminations
Stifle me in warnings of a glare
devoid of a directing hand
and eye me with a timely debonair
incrimination of displaced synapses
only found in your repository
of collected intuitions
Modesty exterminated by your glory
of desirability
I hinge on your reciprocation
of a paced unveil of romantic connotations
only to be hung on fingernails of exasperation

© 2014 kublakhan27



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'Stifle me in warnings of a glare
devoid of a directing hand'...

sounds like a real b***h, love is a jungle and misappropriated to great extents...to paraphrase a good buddy of ours, 'When I'm finished thinking, I have to die a lot, it's almost like the blues'.....it's almost like salvation' Nevermind, now you've got me singing on popular problems....nevermind.. 'Therapy' on the other hand would say never apologize, never explain, but they didn't say a thing about whipping out a sharp sword and plunging into poetic madness/prowess.

As always, your wordplay is brilliantly enticing as you seduce your reader to join you in your Dali/Benji genius. # 6 by the way...only because that's where I usually dwell....x

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

Ha I catch it Mrs.R, and I'm actually smiling...how do you do that? ;) x
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

It's a gift, I've been plagued by fairy dust. ;) ha ha
kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

Haha Not a bad thing to be plagued by ;)



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nice poem
very well penned and thought out
Thanks for sharing

Posted 2 Years Ago


Love is war and war is hell. Don't you hate when people lead you on? Bloody succubi out to suck the life out of you. Thankfully we are not all cold hearted, but this experience sounds like a doozy. I really liked "glory of desirability", it resonated in my head really well if that makes any sense. Another brilliant work of art my friend, I always love reading your pieces.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

This one did indeed come from a deep and decidedly dark place...so glad that it resonated so deeply .. read more
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B.J

I really like the ending of your work, it sums everything up beautifully

Modesty exterminated by your glory
of desirability
I hinge on your reciprocation
of a paced unveil of romantic connotations
only to be hung on fingernails of exasperation

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much Barb, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
B.J

3 Years Ago

you're most welcome
The build up and the crash, all of that is so intense. You've captured that intensity here.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

So glad that this one resonated with you my friend...it was an intense write, and I'm glad to know t.. read more
Excellent execution in your words here. I was baffled at the amazing impact left by the depth within each line. Very well penned. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much Briana...I think it took me three days to get this one out, it was a definite labour .. read more
I was always good at hide and seek.. one time being tiny comes in handy.. only in matters of the heart, it isn't quite so fun is it?.. this one had my mind going lots of places, and loved the word play.. well done Steve!

Posted 3 Years Ago


kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

Haha I guess I should play hide-and-seek more often, it would give me one less reason to complain ab.. read more
wow this is like a misdirection play in football...where is the real love, the real person...why is that person not wanting to show herself...
it's all in the game I guess...

the shadow play...the obscuring, the hiding.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

A fool's game I'm tempted to say...thanks so much Jacob.
Ouch... This is beyond nonsense. It's BS.
If feelings of love or like are not reciprocated then...
You know what to do.
Love the last line!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

The title is also a nod to my own impressions of this piece haha For me, well, I just have to keep w.. read more
Matching Socks

3 Years Ago

I'm going to start reading other people's reviews before I comment so that I appear smarter.
I.. read more
Can I say its darkly romantic, there is some anger and wants, the madness and agitation.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much Mayank...there are definitely elements of all those things in this one.
"Stifle me in warnings of a glare
devoid of a directing hand
and eye me with a timely debonair
incrimination of displaced synapses
only found in your repository"

You express your exasperation so well...

"I hinge on your reciprocation
of a paced unveil of romantic connotations
only to be hung on fingernails of exasperation"

An unsure lover can be so tiring and maddening! It all perfectly expressed in a thoroughly appreciated poetry.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much Divya, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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