This Time

A song i wrote about not letting true love walk out the door. try reading it with an upbeat rythym (i wish i could put music to it so you could hear what i hear)

Baby wait... before you go

There's a few things I want you to know

You see I... I've been doing you wrong

You've been right all along

 

But things will be different baby wait and see

 

(Chorus)

 

This time I'm gonna give it my all

This time I'm breaking down this wall

This time I'll love you more each day

This time it will be better....

If you stay

 

Baby please... I'm pouring out my heart

I should have said these things.. right from the start

Oh baby I.. I still need your touch

This can't be the end.... I need you to damn much

 

(Chorus)

 

This time I'm gonna give it my all

This time I'm breaking down this wall

This time I'll love you more each day

This time it will be better....

If you stay

 

Well I need to hold you...

and I need your kiss

I can't live without you....

We can do better than this

 

Oh, Oh, Oh,

 

(Chorus)

 

This time I'm gonna give it my all

This time I'm breaking down this wall

This time I'll love you more each day

This time it will be better....

If you stay

 

We'll be better in every way....

Oh, Oh.... This time

 

 

Author's Note

please ignore all punctuation and grammar errors.

Reviews

[These Haunted Hallways]

Aw man, this was really beautiful! I could imagine u singing it to us hehe. U are quite a song writer, bravo!! Exquisitely penned! :)

B.A.

[Laura E. Aranda]

awwww
thanks for reviewing my work and i liked this 'song'
do you sing? I wish i could hear music to it
it sounds catchy
poppy
cheers, lea

[Staci Brown]

definitely written as lyrics. good job.

Faerie Blessings!

--faerie whisper (breaking the silence...)

[QuietPoet]

Its beautiful.

[Mz. Rosilyn Vanessa]

What you have written is a beautiful love song. I can hear the Backstreet Boys singing this song as well. Hats off to you for what I like to call a beautiful Love Song that you have written.

[None]

I could hear this definately as a song and you wrote this so dynamically!! A great write full of feeling along with hope.

[E. M. Murren]

Wonderful lyrics. I wish I could hear the song. It is so good. Thank you for sharing this. It really made me smile.