Demon like an Angel

Demon like an Angel

A Poem by gimpy
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dedicated to my big brother

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I sleep in the arms of an angel.
Fully aware of the demon he is,
but despite my best efforts my love will never die.
I know this demon who right now is my guardian angel.
He uses me daily,
still I will never forget him.
I love this demon like a brother who right now is my guardian angel.
his thoughts will never leave my mind long after hes gone.
I'll miss him,this demon who right now is my guardian angel.
he's my brother this demon who right now is my guardian angel.


© 2010 gimpy


Author's Note

gimpy
(I know it's short sorry)have you ever had someone who you love more then anything but they only use you but still you love them

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Poetry is Poetry no matter the length....and as humans we fall in love and do crazy things even though wrong is evident. Its just apart of our instincts...these mistakes help us grow and notice the demons that try to get us later. It's all in your inner will and strength. Evil always fails at some point...and when it does...you just have to run! Emotional Poem, good work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


yes this poem might be short, but I can understand the things you are trying to say. well, your author's note clearly explains it, though i knew what it meant before I read the note >.<

you seem to like using repitition...or maybe it's just the selection of poems that I read by you.

I actually kind of enjoyed reading this poem, I liked how you contrasted your brother with an angel and a demon :D

Posted 13 Years Ago



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