Nights and Nights

Tonight
is colored blue
in the name
of your absence

Tonight
is like a bone

shattering

Reviews

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Well, I can see you kept this short and rather sweet, yet tonight will differ from the other. Trust in that word

[Adam Adams]

it's more like emptiness in the world when the lover of life's being absent, & the lone home is nothing but full of blues. very deep & intellectual poetry you've come to licked down.

[Tim]

The rendering of emptiness within so few words. Blue has always represented sadness. The final stanza is as though the heart has had too much. The ache is overwhelming.

[songbirdwriting]

Thank you for these words - they are beautiful, almost a poem in themselves.

[ReedWrite]

Very poignant...and in that, utterly beautiful.
I love the short poem that speaks so loudly...says far more than the words used to pen it on paper.
Nicely done.

[songbirdwriting]

I myself prefer very short poems that pack a punch with almost no words, so this is my attempt at writing one myself. Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

[Coyote Poetry]

You said a handful in the short poem. Amazing use of words.
Coyote

[songbirdwriting]

The idea was to get as much meaning into as few words as possible. Glad to hear that it worked - thank you so much for your feedback!

[Coyote Poetry]

You did very well and you are welcome.

[Gray]

You show a succinct way of describing loneliness and sorrow. This is short but puts emotion into words nicely.

[songbirdwriting]

Thank you, I appreciate the feedback!