This Marriage, Three

This Marriage, Three

A Poem by Bright Ocean Star
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An Anniversary Present

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This Marriage, Three.....

 

We are Three,

You and I.

Where I go,

God stands by

 

You married me;

He stands with us.

We join together

I give him my trust.

 

In one marriage

We made a family

We raised our children

We offered them

A united front

A three-legged chair

Of leadership provided most fair

 

As we exchanged rings

Golden circles of infinity

Sparkled in the light

bonds of marriage forged

with respect, compassion

bonds resolutely cast

bonds formidable to last

 

Vows were said, promises kept

Together forever, eternity swept

Father, Son, and the Holy Spirit

Ever present, always

Three in one, eternally

 

He stands with us in times of stress

He stands with us in times of strife

He stands with us to shape our life

He holds fast in storms most rife

 

He comes unbidden in the night

to reassure me until morning’s light

holds my hand and calms my fears

of work and stress, without the tears

 

He strengthens you in silence, wait

He warms my heart with love and faith

He is our third, our silent part,

He rights the wrongs that wound our heart

 

He is our silent partner

With wisdom undenied

Ever present in eternity

Always certain and sublime

 

Rock strong in his fortitude

Forgiveness limitless

He is our Holy Father

The third person

of our pair.

 

Bright Ocean Star;  May 25, 2015

 

 

 


© 2015 Bright Ocean Star



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This is über amazing, Anne. Simply stunning, I loved how you've written this one.
Describing what sounds to be a perfect marriage and having Him with you wherever you look.
This is so powerful, honestly there are no words to articulate how stunning this is.

You amaze me with your talent, I honestly love your work!
Miss you, hugs!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bright Ocean Star

2 Years Ago

awwee, you're going to make me blush bright red! Thank you, Sye!
Bright Ocean Star

1 Year Ago

I am so happy you like this one. God needs to be your life partner. He is so much easier to get al.. read more



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This is über amazing, Anne. Simply stunning, I loved how you've written this one.
Describing what sounds to be a perfect marriage and having Him with you wherever you look.
This is so powerful, honestly there are no words to articulate how stunning this is.

You amaze me with your talent, I honestly love your work!
Miss you, hugs!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bright Ocean Star

2 Years Ago

awwee, you're going to make me blush bright red! Thank you, Sye!
Bright Ocean Star

1 Year Ago

I am so happy you like this one. God needs to be your life partner. He is so much easier to get al.. read more
Beautiful piece. I love he parallelism between Father, Son and Holy Ghost with your own trilogy.

Lovely tribute.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bright Ocean Star

2 Years Ago

Thank you, rubie. I deeply appreciate your time reading and reviewing this one. It's always nice to.. read more
yes, the silent partner...this is so beautiful...like redoing the marriage vows within a poem...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bright Ocean Star

2 Years Ago

I just wanted to remind him that it isn't just the two of us leading our crew. We have a very power.. read more
Lovely and spirit-lifting. Nothing completes the peace and happiness of two loved ones like loyalty to the divine. Happy anniversary to you and your life-companion. Thank you for posting this write.

-Wala, aka Rain.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bright Ocean Star

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Rain! I am so happy you stopped in to leave such a nice review. Be blessed!
awe. I like it. :) I wish my boyfriend knew what I thought of him

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bright Ocean Star

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Ena...:) I appreciate you kind words... Thanks for dropping in to read it.
Love founded in Faith. Perfect.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

2 Years Ago

A bit :(
Bright Ocean Star

2 Years Ago

I'm proud of you, MZ. You are a very gifted writer, and a wonderful person. It will come.
MomzillaNC

2 Years Ago

Thanks. :)
Absolutely beautiful. I especially like the eternity part. What begs the question that those you sight "till death do you part" must not hold true authority to marry us into the eternities, unless it's only binding upon the earth and not into the beyond.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bright Ocean Star

2 Years Ago

thank ypu, michael.
This is a mainstream reality turned into an amazing dedication to HIM.
I love your strong belief in him.
A straight-from-the heart construction:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bright Ocean Star

2 Years Ago

Thank you fcbreezy! I am very happy you dropped in to read and leave this kind review...:)
Wow, I am in awe, my brightest friend!!! :)) .....you are the best!!! A very happy anniversary to you!!!
" As we exchanged rings
Golden circles of infinity
Sparkled in the light
bonds of marriage forged
with respect, compassion
bonds resolutely cast
bonds formidable to last
Vows were said, promises kept
Together forever, eternity swept"
What a beautiful write! You've been touched by true love, my dear..., and you made me experience it for an instance too...:))


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bright Ocean Star

2 Years Ago

Oh, thank you, fair moon daughter! I am always so happy to see you drop in and read your wonderful .. read more
happy anniversary, Star!!
wonderful write. as long as He watches over you, there's nothing to fear.
adorable write.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bright Ocean Star

2 Years Ago

Thank you, my friend! :) You always leave the kindest comments...:)

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