Sun

it will rhyme and it wont

SUN

The sun is hot and warm

It can still be in the sky during a thunder storm

I prefer the cold to the sun

even though I have so much fun

Sometimes the sun can get very tiring

And I want to fall asleep

And that's what I want to do now!

Author's Note

yah i dont really care

Reviews

[Bran the Broken]

simple, smiley, and yes, innocent.

[poetic soul]

innocence flows so well thru the poem....after reading this i feel like i want my childhood back when days were so happy and nights care-free...nice write...

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul