ElectricityA Story by Laura LuskAs she sat on the cold stone bridge looking out at the turbulent, yet somehow rhythmic and consistent, ocean before her, she was almost oblivious to the harsh gulf coast breeze and relentless drizzle that was taking residence on her shoulders. Her legs were draped over his lap and together their feet seemed to be softly swaying in harmony with that of the ocean two feet below them. Her arms were wrapped around him and her head was delicately resting on his shoulder. She could feel his finger through her black cotton dress alternating between tracing a straight path down her spinal cord and then creating various patterns along her shoulder blades that she would never get to see. She watched
the lightening in the distance light up the world for a few seconds with each
strike. They seemed to harness enough electricity from the restlessness of the
sky above them to light up the entire night sky for a moment. They then
proceeded to leave an eerie green glow as they reluctantly became a part of the
night sky’s history. It was an extraordinary thing to watch and could be missed
with the blink of an eye. She kept
absentmindedly fumbling for the perfect word to describe what she was feeling,
something she commonly did, but kept coming up blank. Contentment? No, she was
too aroused for a moment of contentment. Arousal? No, she felt too calm for a
moment of arousal. Calm? No, there was too much electricity for a moment of
calmness. Electric? At that
moment his fingertip made its way from her back to her cheek and somehow in the
process, accidental or not, grazed her n****e. The thin cotton dress was no
match for the electricity of his touch and her n****e instantly became hard. She felt
electric. He used his
electric finger to raise her face to his. She looked into his eyes. As he said,
“I love you” she saw the reflection of a lightening bolt in his right eye. With
the soft thunder that followed a second later, came her realization that he
meant it. She didn’t
have to say it back. He already knew. For a
couple of minutes or hours, she couldn’t tell which, they sat watching and
listening and feeling the beauty of the storm before them. She thought
about the night. Just two
hours ago they had drove off the highway and onto the unlit shoreline they had
been to so many times before. They had gotten out and sat in the oversized trunk
of her navy blue SUV. Looking
back, even as they had sat there in that moment, not touching, staring into the
tranquil waters of the ocean, subconsciously, she could feel the electricity
building. Now that
she thought about it, she had felt it on the entire 30 minute drive to the
beach. Even in the parking lot when she saw him for the first time that night,
she had definitely felt a buzz of electricity. She had pointed out the distinguished
gray rain cloud over the neighboring town across the intercostal to him. He
commented on how powerful it looked and how all the clouds in the sky were
drawn to it as he placed his hand on her leg. From there
his touch had slowly made its way down her leg and to her bare foot dusted in
sand, lighting up her skin as it went. It then had proceeded to make its way up
her leg this time, inside her dress. The
anticipation had been killing her and as the two looked at one another, they
simultaneously leaned in to envelope the other pair of lips they knew almost as
well as they knew their own. The kiss
had grown more and more desperate as the electric feel of his hand got farther
and farther up her dress. Then
without warning, his hand had retracted and found its way onto her full right
breast that desperately needed to be caressed. Moaning, she
had took this as her invitation to get on top of him, straddling his lap with
her hands tangled in his curly locks. The storm
had slowly moved across the water. As her
dress came further and further up and his hands came further and further down,
the two had begun to feel raindrops softly moistening their skin. For a
moment, they had relished in the wetness making out and feeling one another’s
body’s against each other, embracing it, the way wetness should be embraced. When a loud
boom of thunder had finally succeeded in breaking their attention from one
another, they noticed reluctantly that the interior of the trunk was becoming
drenched; they decided to take refuge in the back seat of the SUV. She had
instructed him to sit in the middle seat, and as she looked out the rain
streaked windows of the car, she couldn’t help but notice how the bolts of
lightening meeting with the surface of the ocean in the distance behind them
seemed to symphonize with the soft electronic hum of the music he had put on as
they’d rolled onto the beach. Instinctively,
she had got up to lean forward and raise the volume. As she had
done, he grabbed her hips and lifted her dress. At this
point she had no panties on and he effortlessly slid a finger inside her. This had
triggered a moan from her as leaned into the front half of the SUV, giving him
better access. He used the angle to his advantage as he slowly began to lick
the sensitive part of her body that he had come to know so well over the last
three years. Though she
had just turned up the radio, all that could be heard were her moans and when
neither could take it any longer, she turned around and desperately lowered
herself onto him, closing her eyes and relishing in how complete the sensation
made her feel. As she
opened her eyes, the flicker of a lightening strike a few feet behind them had
lit up the car and they had both stared at one another’s naked, connected
bodies. She had not
been able to hold back any longer and as he grabbed her neck and pulled her in
for a kiss, she began gyrating to the electronic dance music he had selected. He had met
her every move equally and perfectly, making the act of their making love seem
choreographed. As she had
leaned back and felt him inside her the two began moaning simultaneously. The lack of
AC in the car, the storm pounding on the car from outside and the heat their
bodies were radiating created a fog on all the windows, encompassing the two
from the the outside world. Their hands
effortlessly slid down one another’s sweaty bodies as they held each other
close and deep. They had
made love countless times over the last few years but this time it was
different. Both in sync with the other’s pleasure as they and the storm around
them rocked the tiny SUV. There was a tone of desperation;
for both had known it was their final night together. This went on for over an hour and
only seized when both were drenched and satisfied. They had then lay in the back seat
of her car in the aftermath of the beauty of the electronic symphony they had
just created. As the clouds slowly moved away from her car, her mind had become
clouded with uncertainty about the man lying next to her. She felt
the familiar pangs of hurt, betrayal, anger, disappointment and love. When he
asked what was wrong, she looked out the window and watched the lightening in
the distance longing to be part of it. Noticing
that the rain had subsided, she had opened the car door leaning her entire
naked upper half outside. Only when
the fresh cool air flooded the SUV, trading places with the hot steamy air
inside, did she feel the serenity wash over her. Concerned,
he had sat up and had now been staring at her. As she
turned to face him once more, she was contented. In this
moment, he was no longer her boyfriend, her friend, her enemy or her soul mate.
He was just himself. He had then
reached for her hand and without hesitation, she took it because what else could
she do? What else could she want to do? The two had
then sat for a while just holding one another. Appreciating the way their
bodies fit together like they were made for each other. Enjoying every moment
of it because they knew it was the last they would get of those moments for a
while. Or forever. Neither of
them knew. Then they
realized they could no longer see the electric pangs of the sky’s fury
striking the ocean in front of them. Among other things, the storm was
something they weren’t quite ready to let go of and they were drawn out of the
SUV. They had then walked to the other side of the bridge where they could watch
the pitiless storm search for its new victim, leaving its path along the way. It was then
she began to wonder, as the man next to her was tracing paths on her back, what
hers was. What his was. What theirs was. But as the
storm moved on leaving an electric glow in its path, so did her thoughts. © 2013 Laura Lusk |
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