Mother Nature

Mother Nature

A Poem by "Fanatical Dreamer"

Stars Night


She awakes her children
each morning, at times without
whispering a sound.
As her brilliance hits the eyes,
of each and everyone.
She’s the queen of romance,
her charm flows naturally,
when she dips,
 into the deep ocean,
it makes lovers weak.
Many soothing vocals,
works in sweet harmony.
Inviting melodic rhythm
gave music, its first beat.
Amazing lullaby,
puts all drowsy eyes to sleep.
Cool presence at night,
challenges an Artistic mind,
to create their counting sheep.

© 2014 "Fanatical Dreamer"



Author's Note

 "Fanatical Dreamer"
I love nature,just had to write a poem on it

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Your love of nature was so beautifully written. Mother Nature taught us to not underestimate the power of her soul we can do no more than stand in knowing how very it can be sometime. :) Larry

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onceloved

2 Years Ago

You more than welcome it is nice to have back again. :) Larry
 "Fanatical Dreamer"

2 Years Ago

Thanks.. feels good to be back! :-)
Wow! Amazing descriptions

Posted 4 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

4 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and commenting
The picture compliments the poem and ye... it does challenge the writer...well done

Posted 4 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
This was breathtakingly beautiful. I was delighted with the descriptions. Well done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
thanks for this journey to a very nice place! You write with a surety and calm that is pervasive and uplifting. I admire your ability to convey both imagery and emotion in simple flawless terms

Posted 5 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

5 Years Ago

Thank you!
This was a delight to read. Nature is full of surprises. Since you didn't show Mother Nature's nocturnal gifts, I was inspired to write this tiny gift poem for you that you may keep as your own. It's in /0/0/0/ and /0/0/ syllable meter with overlapping rhyme:

Nature's Eve

Amber beams from her full moon
close my sleepy eyes
where her blazing stars are strewn
o'er celestial skies.

Crescent waves invade the dune
singing lullabies
as her crickets chirp in tune
with their mating cries.


Posted 5 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

5 Years Ago

Very nice,thanks for sharing
Ive met her before we men have no defense against her

Posted 5 Years Ago


Beautifully penned and nicely rendered...I can hear the whispers of the ocean and see the
lovey hue of the dawn...Rose:)


Posted 5 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

5 Years Ago

Thank you!
Love how you captured the essence of Mother Nature. My favorite is watching the sunset and listening to a symphony of katydids in twilight. Splendid read and write.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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 "Fanatical Dreamer"

5 Years Ago

Thank you!
Almost hypnotic it's that good !

Really enjoyed this nature themed poem, well penned !

Posted 5 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

5 Years Ago

Wow! I'm flattered,thank you for your kind words

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