This Is It

Just writing another poem

This is the ending

Of our philosophy

Messing our Story

Broken dreams and memories

Are past tragedies 

When tongues are our worst criminals

Conspiring againts our inside animals

Human race or Animals

Whats the difference?

If this is it 

Then let it go 

If this it 

Then Let it go

'Cause this thoughts keep messing our minds

Yet they Still it haven't  been mined

This is it

The final chapter

Of a long poem

Of ours

Approaching quickly 

The end is tricky 

But the Start is playing with us

Under the tree of dreams

If this is it

Then Let it goooo

If this is it

Then Let It gooo

Cause broken dreams are our past

And our future is nearly crashed

Then who to believe now?

Who else but yourself 

Author's Note

I think I finally something good here

Reviews

[alf]

Hi Lizardo. Wow!!! This is so from the heart!! What a terrific read' The emotion is so there, the passion underlies the words, and the whole poems flows extremely well. Loved this!!!!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much alf! I'm really thankful for this great review

[closed]

very esoteric
and in your own style of course

you have a way of playing with words
it works really well

really well written

-Dream

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much, I really appreciete it coming from Shaun,
Thank you :)

[closed]

youre welcome
it was really good

[gabiaimee]

If this is it
Then Let it goooo
If this is it
Then Let It gooo

The metre of this piece makes it feel a lot like a song to me. If that is not the case behind your writing then I may rethink having so many o's at the end of the word "go". Otherwise I like it very much. Very thought provoking.

[Lizardo]

Yeah I guess they are more lyrics hahaha.
Thank you so much for you awesome comment :) It is really appreciete it