Atoms

Atoms

A Poem by Lizardo
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Atoms and Molecules

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We live in a world of Atoms
Living around the past and the present 
Is this about our life is all about?
Promptly I become more mature 
As time goes on

I wanna tell you 
That we're all Atoms
Rushing againts each other
We become pararell to each other
Maybe its time to become Molecules

We live in a world of Atoms 
We live in a world of darkness and light
Trouble is a pain in our head
and Mistakes will always be mistakes

I need to tell you
That we're all living a life 
Even if you feel lonely
There are atoms around you
Maybe we need to become Molecules

We dream of being humans
We begin our life since we first think
Because our mind is a great desing

I wanna confess 
That we're all Atoms
Lonely crashing into each other
Maybe we need to become Molecules

I wanna tell you
To never give up 
I wanna tell you 
That you may be an Atom
Thats because you still need to grow
Maybe we need to become molecules

Maybe we need to become Molecules.

© 2015 Lizardo



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the way it has been presented is unique in itself....just loved it.... and yah enjoyed the poem too... this is something different....

Posted 2 Years Ago


yup it's true..... coz you can't give up as u don't know how much near to ur goal u may be

Posted 2 Years Ago


.......a most excellent write....wish more poets would write something similar ★

Posted 2 Years Ago


Science and poetry, very thought provoking and fun to read!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Science and poetry. You made it work. I never liked science. Too straight forward for me. I like the thoughts and the ending. In the end. What do we become? Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


Atoms: Sometimes we all feel so very small, and the poem asks many important questions; the complexities of life, as an atom, alone, building gathering attracted to each other we will become stronger, thus the molecule....Your message/theme of never giving up is beautiful and I love it. Thanks Lizardo. Keep writing...Dale

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lizardo

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Dale! I'm really happy that you like this one, it really came out of my heart (and.. read more
Confuser

2 Years Ago

You're welcome!!!
I find your poem to be a most interesting project. Before publishing however, time should be spent on grammar and editing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lizardo

2 Years Ago

Hmm, interesting, I will check it out more now that I think of it.
Thanks for your helping re.. read more
It is very creative that you describe the need for connecting with people like a chemical reaction...lol. Anyways, back to the point its very well done :) rating 100#

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lizardo

2 Years Ago

You got the whole Idea of the poem IM! nice one and thanks for the review too :)
Dani The Unreviewed

2 Years Ago

Any time my friend :)
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After graduating from molecular status perhaps we become organisms? An interesting idea for a write, very creative and unexpected. Nice job. take care...dan

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lizardo

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Dan, I really appreciete it :)
This is extraordinary! You did an incredible job! I love how it's scientific but still interesting and creative. It flows beautifully! I absolutely loved it!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lizardo

2 Years Ago

Thanks Aless, coming from you this really means a lot :) I really appreciete it
Cool Girl

2 Years Ago

You're very welcome! Amazing job! :)

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Added on June 24, 2015
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Tags: Life, Teen

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