Sweet blade of steel

This is my longest poem I think This is all true happened about at 2:30 to 3:00

Sweet steel blade we meet at last 

It just you me and the world 

Your icy touch 

Sends a shock 

through my body 

You touch my skin 

You push against 

I feel you cut 

But you don't cut through 

Why? 

I don't feel 

The light slowly flowing 

Stream of crimson blood 

Flow down 

My pale skin 

Why does it not flow? 

The blade is pushed in 

Is it not? 

It will not break 

My Flesh 

The blade is not sharp 

My mind starts to remember 

Why I am here 

It is sharper than the blade 

Every second of my life 

Is perfectly preserved 

From my first smile to my first scar 

I can remember everyone's face 

Every lost loved one 

Every stranger 

Every picture 

Everything haunts me 

I wish for only peace 

If pain come with it so be it 

Death is not what I seek 

But if death comes 

I will go 

Sweet steel blade why do you betray?

Reviews

[Chloe]

love the intensity and the deepness. excellent

[ManasaC]

"I wish for only peace
If pain come with it so be it
Death is not what I seek "

I am amazed. It is not easy to be vocal about something as dark as this. well written,

[Lord of mad men]

Thank you for your kind words.

[LazerRays]

this is really good!!! you defently deserve the name lord of mad men!!!

[Lord of mad men]

Well thanks. Well only the mad can lead the mad right.

[LazerRays]

yes lol!!!!!