Mi amor

Mi amor

A Poem by lordofmadmen
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This I wrote for my Ex just a few weeks back when she was still mine... I added the last part.

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My love is pure

My love is sweet

My love has a soul that is twisted like my own

My love is perfect with all her imperfections

My love is strong and independent​.

Her eyes peer into my very soul

Through all the darkness my love shines a light

This light guilds me ever out of the darkness

That has consumed my very being

For that, I owe her far more than my undying love



But now she has left me…..



© 2017 lordofmadmen



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Zoe
Well, sorry to hear about that. But it's a golden opportunity for you to know yourself better, for its in these hard times that one gets closer to himself/herself. Take it as a boon rather than a bane. Grab the opportunity and be your own saviour.
Nicely written!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Once upon a time I resided with the demons in my head, believing I found an angel amongst them, I had faith in love. She turned out to be fallen and dropped me back into a pit of depression and loneliness. So I realized then, I shouldn't give another person the power to bare the torch that guides me out of darkness, I have to be my own light. Look at the way you write friend, your words are so radiant and would light up the hearts of so many who have been broken. You're a romantic and i'm not sure you even know it.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


i am sorry that she left you. but you can do better don't give up. love will find you. don't go searching for it

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lordofmadmen

2 Weeks Ago

Love is not something you can hunt it will find you. Well, I left her but she left in a way before I.. read more
Cassaundra Emmons

2 Weeks Ago

your welcome hun. our thought process and personalities are alike never found that before

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The darkness that resides in the light, OH



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