words of Wisdom

words of Wisdom

A Poem by lovergirl
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one day i was down and upset but then my best friend came to me and made my day so these words came into my mind after we talked ;)

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 Life

In life we all make mistakes,

And with time all have regrets

It’s how to deal with these two that matters

Either it will bring you lovers or haters

You don’t have to care too much for others

Keep in your mind that everything is possible

Sometimes after every bad thing happens

You’ll find something better waiting

So have faith in yourself and be strong

Fight for what’s right and say:”I’m a survivor « 

Keep learning from your faults

Don’t give up from the first falls

We all say that if we could turn back time rewind

We swear that we’d make it undone

But it’d be too late because the “what ifs » won’t make things gone

You just to break the fail wall with a stone

And become a fighter like a backbone  

No sorrows, no tears at all and make your place in this world

And you’ll be happier than what’s ever said with every book’s word

© 2015 lovergirl


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In life we all make mistakes,
And with time all have regrets

Beautiful starting of the write. Very appreciable as well as full of insights! Every single word, every desperate line that you're bled in speaking up to 'bout the wickedness of sinful heart. The heart's always breathing around wounds, fears, scars and poor heartaches that never let the spirit live free from memories. I liked the poetry concept! Very thought invoking! Everyone makes mistakes but only few learn from 'em. Excellent! Great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lovergirl

8 Years Ago

thanks man ! i'm glad you liked it ;)



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In life we all make mistakes,
And with time all have regrets

Beautiful starting of the write. Very appreciable as well as full of insights! Every single word, every desperate line that you're bled in speaking up to 'bout the wickedness of sinful heart. The heart's always breathing around wounds, fears, scars and poor heartaches that never let the spirit live free from memories. I liked the poetry concept! Very thought invoking! Everyone makes mistakes but only few learn from 'em. Excellent! Great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lovergirl

8 Years Ago

thanks man ! i'm glad you liked it ;)
Great advice she gave you to.
We all have done things we regret, but we can't undo them whats done is done.
Sometimes instead of sulking over the past, we need to focus on the future.
Very inspiring piece.
Well done :)


Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

9 Years Ago

Oh im sorry to here that. :(
lovergirl

9 Years Ago

naah , it's okay i'm trying to move on , yet it's too hard
cimmy wuv xxxooo

9 Years Ago

Awww ull be ok :)

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Added on January 10, 2015
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